I blink up at the sun, wondering why it’s so gosh darn hot
inside my cave? It is 86 degrees with the air conditioner struggling to bring
it down a measly six degree. Hell fire, it’s cooler outside than it is inside.
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Books sticks a finger in the crease of the page he’s been
reading from and lays the book carefully on his lap. “I was just about to
mention that to the guys. We’ll need alibis for tonight if what’s in the diary
is true.” He frowns slightly. His eyes lock with his sister’s before he shakes
his head. “No, don’t worry about that, Domi. It’s not important.”
“Okay, the plan has flaws, but at least it’s a start, right? I mean, I went online at the library and found a bunch of websites dedicated to the mythology of the Golden Apple and its magical healing powers. I think of mythology as a religion that is extinct… you know, like the dinosaurs. The golden apple is a fossil, and we have to find it. I think J.J. knew where the golden apple could be found …” Books trails off. “You guys don’t look excited.”
Aren't t he kiddies CUTE?
It’s too hot to keep hibernating. I have no excuse not to finish
the last hundred pages of edits for QUEST. And frankly, I’m ready to move on to
a new summer project. Not that I’ve decided what that will be yet, but I think
I’d like to work on the sequel to QUEST since the characters are so much fun. I’m
not quite ready to abandon them.
Here is a short blurb: Twelve-year-old Malik Ross is having
a horrible week. His mother is in the hospital dying from cancer, he's on the
run from Children's Services who want to put him in a group home, and the stupid
rat in the dumpster he's trying to find his dinner in just stole the last foil
wrapped chicken.
The only bit of hope he has left are his friends who agree
help him in his quest to find the golden apple-which is rumored to be able to
heal any illness. But to find a mythical apple means he has to believe in
magic, and it’s pretty hard for Malik to believe in anything these days.
Poor Malik, he’s desperate to save his mom. Lucky for him,
his friends are willing to brave anything to help him out.
I glance at Raphael who shrugs at me in confusion. Twin connection in progress. Dominique
and Books have the bad habit of speaking to each other as if finishing an
earlier conversation without actually explaining what is going on to the rest
of us. It’s a wicked cool skill, but it still sort of freaks me out when I see them
in action ‘cause it’s not normal. Someday, one of their heads is gonna swell up
like a balloon and pop telepathic brain goo all over the walls.
Raphael puts his back to the window. “What’s not important,
Wonder Twins? And how’s some old dude’s diary gonna help us?”
Books grins, raising the book in the air and waving it like
he’s the one who’s captured the flag. “That’s just it. The guy was ancient. Nobody
lives to be a hundred and twenty-four nowadays, and certainly not back in
ancient times when they had all those nasty plagues and diseases floating
around to off you. Old J.J. talked about a golden apple that has the power to
stop death and give health. Don’t you get it? The golden apple is what we
need.”
“Yeah, but the guy’s fertilizer,” I say. “How are we even
supposed to find this golden apple? Wouldn’t it be dust by now like the dead
dude?”
“Okay, the plan has flaws, but at least it’s a start, right? I mean, I went online at the library and found a bunch of websites dedicated to the mythology of the Golden Apple and its magical healing powers. I think of mythology as a religion that is extinct… you know, like the dinosaurs. The golden apple is a fossil, and we have to find it. I think J.J. knew where the golden apple could be found …” Books trails off. “You guys don’t look excited.”
I blink hard. “I just thought you’d have more than dinosaur
fossils in your backpack. How’s any of this gonna help my mom? You know, the
one who’s in the hospital dying of cancer,”
I pause to get control of my emotions, “I can’t take much more of this, Books.
I know you’re trying to help but…this is crazy.”
I’ve said many times, and I’ll be redundant and say it again—I
love QUEST.
My CP’s (including Kiwi) expressed their excitement about
the story, which motivates me to continue for them. Don and I have been
brainstorming about what will happen to the kiddies after the resolution at the end
of the book, and the new plot is sorting itself out. They have a whole new world to explore with many new adventures to keep them in a
whole lot of trouble. ‘Cause they’re tweens, ya know.
Sounds like a cool, fun story! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cherie. It's my daughter's story. I started it as a way to entertain her when she was little, and I finally decided to write it down. It evolved quite a bit from the original.
ReplyDeleteWhy haven't I seen this yet? It looks great. You holding back on me?
ReplyDeleteMichelle,
ReplyDeleteLOL, I'm saving your expertise for the last round of edits when I'm blurry-eyed from multiple revisions and can't think straight anymore.
You have the unique ability to catch my dangling plot threads and tie them together in an unbreakable knot of consistency.
I can't wait for you to read it though. I'd love to have your opinion. I know you'll slap me upside the head if something's not working.
I'm so excited for this! I can't wait to read the rest of it. :-)
ReplyDeleteHey Kate, I'll send it over once I finish the edits. I want to finish incorporating your suggestions from the beginning chapters to the rest of the book.
ReplyDeleteI saw your awesome radio interview on your blog. I can't wait to hear the whole show. *hugs*
I'll look forward to it, Angie.
ReplyDeleteIf only I could get my own WIP finished.
Nice to meet you, Angie! I love this excerpt. The kids *are* cute, and their conversation flows so believably. Just the right amount of snark. Thx for following me! (As you can see, I'm follower challenged.) Now I'll return the favor.
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